diff --git a/ownership/index.html b/ownership/index.html
index cd7de66..0f05bbd 100644
--- a/ownership/index.html
+++ b/ownership/index.html
@@ -34,16 +34,16 @@ redirect_from:
             Financed by Grants, Loans and <span style="color: #6188ff;">You</span>
           </h2>
           <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
-            We are thankful for all the partnerships & possibilities that are emerging
-            from our R&D heavy years in which we are exploring new privacy frontiers.
+            We are thankful for all the partnerships & possibilities that emerged
+            from our earlier R&D heavy years in order to explore new privacy frontiers.
             <br>
             <br>
-            Slowly but surely we are migrating into our dream scenario where we only
-            have to rely on the support and trust of our users. Help us get there by
-            using Portmaster and later down the road, purchasing an upgrade.
+            Slowly but surely we migrated into our dream scenario where we only
+            have to rely on the support and trust of our users. Help us remain independent by
+            using Portmaster and considering an upgrade.
           </p>
           <a class="btn-secondary" href="{{ site.pricing_url }}">Support with a Purchase</a>
-          <a class="btn-tertiary hover-opacity-out" href="#influences">Explore the Details</a>
+          <a class="btn-tertiary hover-opacity-out" href="#influences">Explore R&D Details</a>
       </div>
   </div>
   <div class="influence-container" id="influences">
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ redirect_from:
               <span class="influence-container-top-data">updated {{ site.last_finances_update_on }}</span>
           </div>
           <p class="influence-container-top-desc">
-              Through these partnerships we are not only receiving funding, but
+              Through these partnerships we not only received funding, but
               much needed support, advice, training, encouragement and helpful
               criticism.
               <br>