From c19558469ea0ddb9112f52b3add047ba5985357c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: davegson <3080765+davegson@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 17 Oct 2022 16:35:02 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Improve wording on download page & button

---
 _includes/download_button.html |  8 ++++----
 download/index.html            | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/_includes/download_button.html b/_includes/download_button.html
index f3cdea2..752d3d8 100644
--- a/_includes/download_button.html
+++ b/_includes/download_button.html
@@ -4,20 +4,20 @@
     <label class="download-os download-os-windows" for="windows-{{ include.unique_id }}">Windows (.exe)</label>
     <input checked="" id="windows-{{ include.unique_id }}" type="radio" class="download-os" name="os-{{ include.unique_id }}">
     <div class="download-os-actions">
-        <a class="button-left" href="{{ site.download_windows_url }}">Download for</a>
+        <a class="button-left" href="{{ site.download_windows_url }}">Free Download</a>
         <button class="button-right">Windows</button>
     </div>
     <label class="download-os download-os-ubuntu" for="ubuntu-{{ include.unique_id }}">Debian/Ubuntu (.deb)</label>
     <input id="ubuntu-{{ include.unique_id }}" type="radio" class="download-os" name="os-{{ include.unique_id }}">
     <div class="download-os-actions">
-        <a class="button-left" href="{{ site.download_linux_deb_url }}">Download for</a>
+        <a class="button-left" href="{{ site.download_linux_deb_url }}">Free Download</a>
         <button class="button-right">Ubuntu</button>
     </div>
     <label class="download-os download-os-fedora" for="fedora-{{ include.unique_id }}">Fedora (.rpm)</label>
     <input id="fedora-{{ include.unique_id }}" type="radio" class="download-os" name="os-{{ include.unique_id }}">
     <div class="download-os-actions">
-        <a class="button-left" href="{{ site.download_linux_rpm_url }}">Download for</a>
+        <a class="button-left" href="{{ site.download_linux_rpm_url }}">Free Download</a>
         <button class="button-right">Fedora</button>
     </div>
     <div class="download-os-menu"></div>
-</div>
\ No newline at end of file
+</div>
diff --git a/download/index.html b/download/index.html
index a0c4bc3..aba87b6 100644
--- a/download/index.html
+++ b/download/index.html
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
             Download
             Portmaster
         </h1>
-        <p class="header-three-left-desc">
-          It's about time there was a software that gave you the user power and instead of takening it away from you.
+        <p class="header-three-left-desc" style="max-width: 310px">
+          Let Portmaster do the heavy lifting for you. Get back your privacy.
         </p>
         <div class="space-y-4">
             <div class="element-x-center-max lg:ml-0">
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
     <div class="influence-container-top">
         <div class="influence-container-top-title-date">
             <h2 class="influence-container-top-title">
-              Desktops
+              Desktop
             </h2>
         </div>
     </div>
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
             </div>
             <div class="col-container-center w-full md:w-max text-center md:text-left pt-10">
                 <a class="btn-primary" href="{{ site.download_windows_url }}"><i class="icon-windows text-md mr-2"></i>Download</a>
-                <a target="_blank" class="btn-secondary" href="https://docs.safing.io/portmaster/install/windows">Go to Docs</a>
+                <a target="_blank" class="btn-secondary" href="https://docs.safing.io/portmaster/install/windows">View Docs</a>
             </div>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
                 <span class="card-influence-bottom-funding-amount">
                       <a target="_blank" href="https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/NetworkManager" class="link-primary-external">Network Manager</a>
                       <span> (Optional)</span>
-                      <span tooltip="This is for better integration. It is recommended, but optional."> <i  class="icon-info text-gray-500 ml-1"></i></span>
+                      <span tooltip="This is recommended for better integration, but not required."> <i  class="icon-info text-gray-500 ml-1"></i></span>
                 </span>
             </div>
             <div class="card-influence-bottom-funding">
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
             </div>
             <div class="col-container-center w-full md:w-max text-center md:text-left pt-10">
                 <a class="btn-primary" href="{{ site.download_linux_deb_url }}"><i class="icon-ubuntu text-md mr-2"></i>Download</a>
-                <a target="_blank" class="btn-secondary" href="https://docs.safing.io/portmaster/install/linux">Go to Docs</a>
+                <a target="_blank" class="btn-secondary" href="https://docs.safing.io/portmaster/install/linux">View Docs</a>
             </div>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
                 <span class="card-influence-bottom-funding-amount">
                     <a target="_blank" href="https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/NetworkManager" class="link-primary-external">Network Manager</a>
                     <span> (Optional)</span>
-                    <span tooltip="This is for better integration. It is recommended, but optional."> <i  class="icon-info text-gray-500 ml-1"></i></span>
+                    <span tooltip="This is recommended for better integration, but not required."> <i  class="icon-info text-gray-500 ml-1"></i></span>
               </span>
             </div>
             <div class="card-influence-bottom-funding">
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
             </div>
             <div class="col-container-center w-full md:w-max text-center md:text-left pt-10">
                 <a class="btn-primary" href="{{ site.download_linux_rpm_url }}"><i class="icon-fedora text-md mr-2"></i>Download</a>
-                <a target="_blank" class="btn-secondary" href="https://docs.safing.io/portmaster/install/linux">Go to Docs</a>
+                <a target="_blank" class="btn-secondary" href="https://docs.safing.io/portmaster/install/linux">View Docs</a>
             </div>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
                 <span class="card-influence-bottom-funding-amount">
                     <a target="_blank" href="https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/NetworkManager" class="link-primary-external">Network Manager</a>
                     <span> (Optional)</span>
-                    <span tooltip="This is for better integration. It is recommended, but optional."> <i  class="icon-info text-gray-500 ml-1"></i></span>
+                    <span tooltip="This is recommended for better integration, but not required."> <i  class="icon-info text-gray-500 ml-1"></i></span>
               </span>
             </div>
             <div class="card-influence-bottom-funding">
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
             </div>
             <div class="col-container-center w-full md:w-max text-center md:text-left">
                 <a target="_blank" class="btn-primary" href="{{ site.download_arch_url }}">Download (AUR)</a>
-                <a target="_blank" class="btn-secondary" href="https://docs.safing.io/portmaster/install/linux">Go to Docs</a>
+                <a target="_blank" class="btn-secondary" href="https://docs.safing.io/portmaster/install/linux">View Docs</a>
             </div>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Download
                 <span class="card-influence-bottom-funding-amount">
                     <a target="_blank" href="https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/NetworkManager" class="link-primary-external">Network Manager</a>
                     <span> (Optional)</span>
-                    <span tooltip="This is for better integration. It is recommended, but optional."> <i  class="icon-info text-gray-500 ml-1"></i></span>
+                    <span tooltip="This is recommended for better integration, but not required."> <i  class="icon-info text-gray-500 ml-1"></i></span>
               </span>
             </div>
             <div class="card-influence-bottom-funding">