From b4fec237571464cdc3af090b2d68e93e7639f54b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: davegson <3080765+davegson@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 18 May 2020 17:43:07 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Shorten and improve index texts

---
 index.html | 20 +++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 7aa3188..def4a2b 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ title: Safing
               <div class="mt-4 ml-4">
                 <h5 class="text-2xl leading-6 font-bold text-gray-900">Open Source</h5>
                 <p class="mt-4 text-base leading-6 opacity-50 max-w-sm m-auto">
-                  Your kernel should only be modified and extended in the open, so you are able to <a href="{{ site.github_url }}"><u>validate the code behind our claims</u></a>.
+                  Secure software can only emerge when many smart people review and contribute to the code base.
                 </p>
               </div>
             </li>
@@ -43,11 +43,9 @@ title: Safing
                 </svg>
               </div>
               <div class="mt-4 ml-4">
-                <h5 class="text-2xl leading-6 font-bold text-gray-900">Out of Principle</h5>
+                <h5 class="text-2xl leading-6 font-bold text-gray-900">Transparency</h5>
                 <p class="mt-4 text-base leading-6 opacity-50  max-w-sm m-auto">
-                  The technology protecting you is only one part. Every chain breaks at its weakest link.
-                  <br/>
-                  So have a good <a href="{{ site.about_url }}"><u>look at who we are</u></a>.
+                  Trust to handle your sensitive data can only grow by being open about our company. In every aspect.
                 </p>
               </div>
             </li>
@@ -60,9 +58,9 @@ title: Safing
                 </svg>
               </div>
               <div class="mt-4 ml-4">
-                <h5 class="text-2xl leading-6 font-bold text-gray-900">One of Many</h5>
+                <h5 class="text-2xl leading-6 font-bold text-gray-900">Our Quest</h5>
                 <p class="mt-4 text-base leading-6 opacity-50 max-w-sm m-auto">
-                  Privacy is complex. We are just one piece of your puzzle. Still, help us improve that piece and <a href="#footer"><u>become a part of the venture</u></a>!
+                  We chase freedom so our societies can flourish. Giving control back to the people is way overdue.
                 </p>
               </div>
             </li>
@@ -83,7 +81,7 @@ title: Safing
           <span style="font-size: 12rem; font-weight: 800; margin-top: -9rem; margin-left: -3rem; opacity: 0.05;" class=" z-0 absolute bg-top">01</span>
           <h2 class="text-5xl  tracking-tight font-extrabold leading-none py-10 lg:w-2/3">Powerful VPN Alternative</h2>
           <p class="text-md opacity-50 max-w-lg">
-            Cut out the middleman. Secure all your meta-data by decoupling yourself from your destination, inspired by Tor. Protect your whole computer, not only your browser. <span class="text-xs">Yes, we know Tails exists.</span>
+            Cut out the middleman. Secure all your meta-data by decoupling yourself from your destination, inspired by Tor. Protect your whole computer, not only your browser.
           </p>
           <div class="py-10 lg:flex text-center sm:text-left inline-block">
             <a href="{{ site.spn_url }}">
@@ -106,9 +104,9 @@ title: Safing
           </div>
           <div class="inline-block max-w-lg">
             <span style="font-size: 12rem; font-weight: 800; margin-top: -9rem; margin-left: -3rem; opacity: 0.05;" class=" z-0 absolute bg-top">02</span>
-            <h2 class="text-5xl  tracking-tight font-extrabold leading-none py-10 lg:w-2/3">All Around System Privacy</h2>
+            <h2 class="text-5xl  tracking-tight font-extrabold leading-none py-10 lg:w-2/3">All-Around System Privacy</h2>
             <p class="text-md opacity-50 max-w-lg">
-              Enforce DNS-over-TLS and block domains on a system level. Protect your whole computer, not only your browser. Free to use. Open source. Modular. <span class="text-xs">Naturally.</span>
+              Enforce DNS-over-TLS and block domains on a system wide level. Protect your whole computer, not only your browser. Free to use.
             </p>
             <div class="py-10 md:flex text-center md:text-left inline-block">
               <a href="{{ site.portmaster_url }}">
@@ -116,7 +114,7 @@ title: Safing
                   Discover the Portmaster
                 </button>
               </a>
-              <a class="inline-flex pl-8 transition duration-150 ease-in-out hover:opacity-100 self-center  uppercase opacity-50 text-xs font-bold" href="{{ site.github_url }}/portmaster/">Github Repository</a>
+              <a class="inline-flex pl-8 transition duration-150 ease-in-out hover:opacity-100 self-center  uppercase opacity-50 text-xs font-bold" href="{{ site.github_url }}/portmaster/">Source Code</a>
             </div>
           </div>
         </div>