From 7547b9b423babd2d2806b7347e60f3950df707d1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: davegson <3080765+davegson@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 25 Feb 2021 10:50:05 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Rephrase two things based on raphtys feedback --- business-model/index.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/business-model/index.html b/business-model/index.html index e40483c..379d661 100644 --- a/business-model/index.html +++ b/business-model/index.html @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ layout: page Provide Local Value for Free, Forever </h2> <p class="text-md opacity-55 max-w-lg"> - Everybody deserves privacy, not only the wealthy. That is why all local privacy features are free, and will remain so forever. This fits perfectly into the Freemium business model as well as our open source approach. + Everybody deserves privacy, not only the wealthy. That is why all local privacy features are free, and will remain so forever. This fits perfectly into the Freemium business model as well as into FOSS, free and open source software. </p> <div class="py-10 sm:py-10 text-center sm:flex"> <a href="{{ site.portmaster_url }}"> @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ layout: page Sell Protection in Transit </h2> <p class="text-md opacity-55 max-w-lg" style="max-width: 471px;"> - There is privacy that comes with a cost because it requires additional server bandwidth. Naturally, this is where we charge for our VPN alternative. You get an extra service, we get to finance ourselves. + There is privacy that comes with a cost because it requires additional server bandwidth. Naturally, this is where we charge for our powerful VPN alternative. You get an extra service, we get to finance ourselves. </p> <div class="py-10 sm:py-10 text-center sm:flex"> <a href="{{ site.spn_url }}">