From 28a600be4e4cbb32916e50f699f2051a36445f02 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: johnnyburnaway <60918126+johnnyburnaway@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 22 Apr 2026 13:59:23 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Features page: writing style update and remove PrivacyTools
 reference

---
 _includes/download_container.html |  1 -
 features/index.html               | 23 +++++++++--------------
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/_includes/download_container.html b/_includes/download_container.html
index 8366687..34388be 100644
--- a/_includes/download_container.html
+++ b/_includes/download_container.html
@@ -17,7 +17,6 @@
         <p class="block text-safing-gray-400">Seen and featured on</p>
         <div class=" space-x-8 hidden lg:flex" style="align-items: center;">
             <a href="{{ site.seen_itsfoss_url }}" class="hover-scale-in cursor-pointer hover-grayscale-in"><img src="{{ site.img_url }}external/itsfoss.png"></a>
-            <a href="{{ site.seen_privacytools_url }}" class="hover-scale-in cursor-pointer hover-grayscale-in"><img src="{{ site.img_url }}external/privacytools.png"></a>
             <a href="{{ site.seen_techlore_url }}" class="hover-scale-in cursor-pointer hover-grayscale-in"><img src="{{ site.img_url }}external/techlore.png"></a>
             <a href="{{ site.seen_ghacks_url }}" class="hover-scale-in cursor-pointer hover-grayscale-in"><img src="{{ site.img_url }}external/ghacks.png"></a>
         </div>
diff --git a/features/index.html b/features/index.html
index 389989c..c709300 100644
--- a/features/index.html
+++ b/features/index.html
@@ -7,10 +7,10 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Features
     <div class="space-y-28">
       <div class="intro-container" id="features">
         <h2 class="intro-container-title">
-          Explore All Portmaster Features
+          Explore Portmaster Features
         </h2>
         <p class="intro-container-desc">
-          With Portmaster's great defaults your privacy improves without any effort. And if you want to configure and control everything down to the last detail - Portmaster has you covered too!
+          Out of the box, Portmaster blocks incoming connections, filters trackers and malware hosts, and routes all DNS queries over TLS. Every setting is configurable if you need finer control.
         </p>
       </div>
       <div class="showcase-one-container-reverse">
@@ -22,9 +22,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Features
                 Monitor All Network Activity
               </h2>
               <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
-                Discover everything that is happening on your computer. Expose every
-                connection your applications make and detect evil ones. Finally get
-                the power to act accordingly.
+                See every network connection your applications make in real time. Identify unexpected or unwanted connections and block them individually or by rule.
               </p>
           </div>
       </div>
@@ -35,7 +33,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Features
       </div>
       <div class="showcase-one-right">
           <h2 class="showcase-one-right-title" style="max-width: 410px;" id="#auto-block-trackers-and-malware">
-            Auto-Block Trackers & Malware
+            Block Trackers & Malware System-Wide
           </h2>
           <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
             Block ads, trackers and malware hosts system-wide. Portmaster does this by default and uses trusted filter lists,
@@ -53,8 +51,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Features
           Secure Your DNS by Default
         </h2>
         <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
-          Even with invasive connections gone, you do not want to share your DNS requests
-          out in the open. With Portmaster, all your DNS queries are automatically secured and re-routed to a DNS-over-TLS provider of your choice.
+          Unencrypted DNS queries expose your browsing activity to your ISP and network observers. Portmaster routes all DNS queries over DNS-over-TLS to a provider of your choice.
         </p>
       </div>
     </div>
@@ -67,12 +64,10 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Features
             Explore the Docs and Source Code
           </h2>
           <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
-            In the age of Mass Surveillance, what good is a service when you cannot see what
-            it is really doing? We believe in open source. We also document everything
-            as good as we can.
+            Portmaster is fully open source. Read the source code, audit the behaviour, or contribute. Documentation is available in the wiki.
           </p>
           <div class="col-container w-full text-left md:text-center lg:w-max lg:text-left space-x-4" style="margin-left: 0;">
-            <a class="btn-secondary" href="{{ site.wiki_url }}">Checkout the Wiki</a>
+            <a class="btn-secondary" href="{{ site.wiki_url }}">Check out the wiki</a>
             <a target="_blank" class="link-primary-external inline-flex" href="{{ site.github_url }}/portmaster"><i class="icon-github text-md mr-2"></i>Inspect source code</a>
           </div>
       </div>
@@ -86,7 +81,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Features
             Create Your Own Rules
           </h2>
           <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
-            Portmaster has great defaults - but one shoe does not fit all. Customize and configure Portmaster's powerful settings to fit your needs and threat model.
+            The defaults work for most users, but every setting is configurable. Adjust rules to match your specific needs and threat model.
           </p>
       </div>
     </div>
@@ -99,7 +94,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Features
               Set Global & per‑App Settings
             </h2>
             <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
-              Easily cut off applications from the Internet. Or block all p2p connections globally but allow them for certain apps. Or never connect to specific countries. Portmaster has you covered.
+              Cut off applications from the internet, block specific connection types, or restrict connections to certain countries per app or globally.
             </p>
         </div>
     </div>