diff --git a/business-model/index.html b/business-model/index.html
index 89ada8e..27754c2 100644
--- a/business-model/index.html
+++ b/business-model/index.html
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ layout: page
           </h2>
           <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
             Everybody deserves privacy, not only the wealthy. That is why
-            all local privacy features are free, and will remain so forever.
+            so many local privacy features are free, and will remain so forever.
             This fits perfectly into the Freemium business model as well as
             into FOSS, free and open source software.
           </p>
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ layout: page
           <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
             There is privacy that comes with a cost because it requires
             additional server bandwidth. Naturally, this is where we charge
-            for our powerful VPN&nbsp;alternative. You get an extra service,
+            for our superior VPN&nbsp;alternative. You get extra privacy, while
             we get to finance ourselves.
           </p>
           <a class="btn-secondary" href="{{ site.spn_url }}">Discover SPN</a>
diff --git a/pricing/index.html b/pricing/index.html
index 0d882a9..8c271eb 100644
--- a/pricing/index.html
+++ b/pricing/index.html
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@ title: Safing Portmaster - Pricing
             </h2>
             <p class="showcase-one-right-desc">
             Everybody deserves privacy, not only the wealthy. That is why
-            all local privacy features are free, and will remain so forever.
+            so many local privacy features are free, and will remain so forever.
             This fits perfectly into the Freemium business model.
             </p>
             <a class="btn-secondary" href="{{ site.business_model_url }}">Explore our Business Model</a>